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Mother coddles lethargy needles
and poetry knives as bitter night songs
ghost over cracked lips.
The systematic caress of steel tip
trails along the supple
curl of distended belly, teasing.
Cruel metaphor blades delve
into epidermis layer. dull chemical
infatuation slips into the bloodstream.
She quietly releases malignant
melodies. soft ecstasy sighs.
Lacerated fetus chamber
penetrated by inquisitive marrow digits,
secretes liquid-ruby fantasies.
She violates herself, carving
a permanent eulogy into her womb.
Mother tugs at the umbilical cord,
dragging prune shape from her uterus vessel
and into her wire arms. close to breast.
Blue-tinged parasite child shall
dream forever, lulled by solemn notes
dislodged from sluggish tongue.
And mother simply smiles, satisfied.
and poetry knives as bitter night songs
ghost over cracked lips.
The systematic caress of steel tip
trails along the supple
curl of distended belly, teasing.
Cruel metaphor blades delve
into epidermis layer. dull chemical
infatuation slips into the bloodstream.
She quietly releases malignant
melodies. soft ecstasy sighs.
Lacerated fetus chamber
penetrated by inquisitive marrow digits,
secretes liquid-ruby fantasies.
She violates herself, carving
a permanent eulogy into her womb.
Mother tugs at the umbilical cord,
dragging prune shape from her uterus vessel
and into her wire arms. close to breast.
Blue-tinged parasite child shall
dream forever, lulled by solemn notes
dislodged from sluggish tongue.
And mother simply smiles, satisfied.
Literature
the ghost
I don't know what I'm waiting for,
because I am a ghost and yet
I sit on my hands and wonder
where you've been -
I walk the forest in circles,
the methodical crunch
of leaves beneath my feet
and I remember
that you made me feel small,
and alone. here I am, facing
this brilliant hue that is me and myself
and I am the ghost but somehow
you are haunting me.
Literature
Tragedy
I’m the girl in the books that is a mystery. A tragic heroin that gives the main character a new perspective.
Quiet girl, riot girl. A rebel, a tragedy.
I’m the wild ride, the adventure, the challenge. I’m the girl he wants to know all about until he goes too far and I’m no longer real.
I’m the manic depressive pixie dream girl with a tragic end.
I’m not his type but he goes after me anyway because my wild eyes, wild hair, wild life, wild thoughts.
Oh look, I’ve got an attitude. Screaming at the world, fuck the system, tongue as sharp as a knife attitude. Middle fingers, swearing at everyone, bit
Literature
A vision of mind - blurb
Title:
A Vision of Mind
Synopsis:
The life of Lyriana, a girl of around 18 years old, is put upside down as she is followed by count Darragh. She starts to cooperate with Marven, who is also followed by the count. From that moment on their lives take swerves they never imagined to be possible.
Characters:
Lyriana (protagonist): a girl of around 18 years old who does not know her parents and is desperate for learning the past. She has been living in the woods since she was ten years old.
Marven (protagonist): a boy of around 20 years old who is fleeing for count Darragh for a few years already. He is a traveler and hooks up with Lyriana i
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This is a really really really cool piece.
My one suggestion is to not break the really interesting pattern you have going of only capitalizing the first line of each stanza by doing it in all the stanzas, even the short ones, and especially the final line. Presumably, they are visually separated from the rest of the poem in order to show emphasis, and I think that capitalizing them would only help you show that.
As for punctuation, I think what you've got here is really quite interesting. It really shows how you want the poem to be read. With the exception of maybe changing a few dashes to commas or periods, I think that the punctuation is perfect.
Really good work. Very vivid, very creepy and disturbing, but in a beautiful kind of way. Nice job!
This is a really really really cool piece.
My one suggestion is to not break the really interesting pattern you have going of only capitalizing the first line of each stanza by doing it in all the stanzas, even the short ones, and especially the final line. Presumably, they are visually separated from the rest of the poem in order to show emphasis, and I think that capitalizing them would only help you show that.
As for punctuation, I think what you've got here is really quite interesting. It really shows how you want the poem to be read. With the exception of maybe changing a few dashes to commas or periods, I think that the punctuation is perfect.
Really good work. Very vivid, very creepy and disturbing, but in a beautiful kind of way. Nice job!