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thunderclap

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Can I be the thunderclap tickle plucking scales
down the stringed column of your
sweet vertebrae?

I would shake the nerves,crack them open
and feast upon the monster texture
that makes a human pinch their eyes tight.

those careless t-storms can make
the most hard-boned devil wail
in the brief nuance of energy bursts.


[the initial heat expansion from  soft
crackling lights leaves the threads
of your flesh prickled with anticipation]


And I want to do that to you--
weave through the tender wires, twirl
currents into the weepy slope of you.



you would love it

(love. it. ) (love. it.)

love me?
the things i write [are never good enough]

nothing much to say. kind of just wanted to throw something onto the table. eat up and spit it out if you want [i would. i do. and i will].
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intricately-ordinary's avatar
this is miles past good enough.
this is amazing.

the imagery is fantastic, that last stanza gave me chills.
it's all the things I've felt in ways I'd never thought of before.